smallfuzzy

Hi!

I’m here via thady’s reading page.
I’m not very good at giving feedback, but I really liked this story.

The repeat of “He didn’t know who he was” and “You did not leave people to face the soldiers” gave a sense of coherence even as Radek was losing the coherence of memory (if that makes sense?).

I also liked that the first time he met other people, Radek adressed them in (presumably) Czech and yet didn't remember what exactly his native language was. Just a small thing, but it adds to the confusion and angst.

The ending hit me like a punch in the gut, but I liked it because it brought home the fact that we don’t know much about Radek and the darkness he has (or might have) experienced.

I’m glad you wrote about Radek in “Tabula Rasa”, because a) he’s one of my favorite characters and b) there is not enough fic about the reasons for his behavior in this episode. Character exploration is always a plus and you did it very well.

Thank you for writing this!

- Py